Working with others can expose you to ideas or perspectives you may not have considered on your own. What is one idea, suggestion, or approach from a group member that improved your paragraph or changed the way you thought about the argument? Explain how it helped you.

 Prompt Response: While working in a group one idea or suggestion that improved my paragraph was when someone told me to make my sentences shorter but clearer. This changed the way I thought about the argument as I have a habit of making my sentences longer than need, and still not addressing the point as clearly as I had hoped. This suggestion helped me by allowing my argument to be more effective as I started structuring my sentences in a clearer and more concise way.

Summary: Today in class we got into groups and further discussed how we would finish our paragraphs.

Reflection: Today I learned that in order to make a good paragraph sentences need to be carefully structured and well thought to effectively deliver the message. I also learned that working in groups while listening and contributing ideas can lead to great work. In the future I will definitely use the feedback I get to improve my work.


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